Cold (Section V)

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Something RealMay 08, 2014
She began to smell and taste the hint of blood in her nostrils and at the back of her throat - sure signs that she'd taxed her lungs to their breaking point. The damage was inconsequential; all that mattered was that she protect the last of her offspring - her son. He was everything to her; the last bit of warmth in the entire world as he lay curled up within the protective shell of his egg - unknowing of what the strange light had done to the sky and everything beneath it. As the copperish taste came to the edges of her senses, warning her of the damage she was consciously allowing to befall her body, the first of the nest thieves at last clawed its way to the top of the nest, hooting and warbling weakly in its perceived victory as it flapped its pitifully small arms and craned its head down to gaze upon the succulent treasues held within the veritable mountain over which it had triuphed. Yet, in that instance, something took place for which it and the rest of its starving flock had not accounted. The unmoving thing beside the nest, the thing that had seemed robbed of life by the blanket of strange grey rain that covered it, came back to life!

Something RealMay 08, 2014
In the blink of an eye she willed her body to move with blinding speed - conserving energy as she simply lunged forward to clamp her massive jaws around the lone marauder that had managed to reach the summit of her nest. Bands of thick, dark blood streaked out across the grey and white ground in spattered lines as her killing jaws broke the nest theif's body like a writhing collection of dry twigs. There was no struggle. There was only the definitive moment of another life ending within the cold - a terrible sense that something irreplacable had been irrevocably and forever removed from the world. Yet, she was oblivious to this higher notion of sentiment. There was only the will to defend what was hers mingled with the taste of fresh blood - the blood of things she knew only as prey and the killers of unborn children.

Something RealMay 08, 2014
Screeching and gibbering as the shock of the horrid event momentarily turned their blood to ice and forced them to freeze, the other nest thieves could only stare in abject horror as the bisected remains of their leader were thrown to the ground before them with the sickening, wet crunch of ruined tissue, punctured organs and shattered bone. However, their large, fear-widened eyes soon darted upward to look upon the thing that had stolen one of their flock - the thing they'd wrongfully guessed as dead. She could see that her moment to act in full had at last come. Her prey stood motionless - transfixed in the lazily-falling sheets of grey and black rain. She doubted her chances of claiming them all, but she knew this day wouldn't come to a close with a full flock of nest thieves departing her territory. An example was needed - one as terrible as those she once made when her body was still flush with health. Thus, willing a portion of the precious little strength still held within her body to power the weakening muscles in her legs, she pushed herself up slowly from the tortured ground...and rose...
Evan123May 08, 2014
That was brilliant SOMETHING REAL, another wonderful piece of writing!
How far can we push nature before it pushes back?


Lord VaderMay 09, 2014
Great job again. Looking forward to the next.
Jack of all trades. Master of none

Something RealMay 09, 2014
MR.HAPPY9097 - I'm extremely pleased you enjoyed it. I'm attempting to throw in some more action-oriented events for you guys whom enjoy dino-fights. I hope I'm illustrating such moments well enough for your liking. You and the others that write the battle sequences do such a fantastic job; I'm almost hesitant to try to follow in your footsteps. :)

Lord VaderMay 09, 2014
You're doing a good job with action, don't worry.
Jack of all trades. Master of none

Something RealMay 09, 2014
MR.HAPPY9097 - That's very enheartening to hear! Thank you so very much! :)

Gojira2KMay 09, 2014
Wow! That is amazing. Can't wait for the next one.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.

Something RealMay 09, 2014
GOJIRA2K - I'm very pleased you enjoyed this entry. I'll make certain the next one is out next Thursday or Friday. :)
UCMP 118742May 10, 2014
This is just great. You are exceptionally good at writing and don't worry, you're just as good with action from what I've seen so far.
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-

Something RealMay 10, 2014
UCMP118742 - Thank you so very much. Your words are exceptionally encouraging. I'll make certain to no let you guys down. :)


